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Your Love

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Your love is like a diamond,
So beautiful and bright.
Your love is like a diamond,
You are my glist'ning light.

Your love is like a fire,
So passionate and hot.
Your love is like a fire,
And I love you a lot.

Your love is like a shining star
That lights the darkest night.
Your love is like a shining star;
That's why you are my life.
This is an ode I wrote last year. Since I don't see "Ode" anywhere in the Literature category, I just chose to put it in with songs, since odes are sort of like teeny songs.
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CheekyFox's avatar
The quality of this work is such that I almost fell off my chair when I saw it. I read it aloud to my dad, who promptly oh-my-gosh'ed loudly and inquired as to the name of the author. I kind of want to set it to music, but I'm afraid I couldn't compose anything quite fitting. =)